tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3326273121989470100.comments2012-02-16T18:36:28.468-08:00FrankenPigTami Absihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12453569302981232748noreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3326273121989470100.post-3775456401236618252012-02-16T05:04:35.008-08:002012-02-16T05:04:35.008-08:00Very Nice Blog !
I Like This Very Much.
Methods of...Very Nice Blog !<br />I Like This Very Much.<br /><a href="http://royfarm.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Methods of Modern Farming</a><br /><a href="http://royfarm.blogspot.com/2012/02/pig-farming.html" rel="nofollow">Pig Farming</a>Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079093077149599805noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3326273121989470100.post-39990738175868215142011-09-13T16:29:35.395-07:002011-09-13T16:29:35.395-07:00Nice to have a response, just go on and submit to ...Nice to have a response, just go on and submit to another agent. Good luck.Lorihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00627753507423390187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3326273121989470100.post-71689687885319008902011-09-07T06:37:48.757-07:002011-09-07T06:37:48.757-07:00Take 'There's nothing wrong here' as a...Take 'There's nothing wrong here' as a positive and move on. The right agent is out there!clpauwelshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17593765516891634999noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3326273121989470100.post-92136881240856886182011-09-06T18:29:41.304-07:002011-09-06T18:29:41.304-07:00That is just an odd response!That is just an odd response!Tracienoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3326273121989470100.post-9437301666320441842011-06-26T22:34:27.645-07:002011-06-26T22:34:27.645-07:00k!!
checking your blog now!! Interested in readin...k!!<br /><br />checking your blog now!! Interested in reading!!<br /><br />with warm regards<br /><a href="http://becomingprince.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow"> Another Author </a>Abhishekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03633374524540097827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3326273121989470100.post-13883622386463024452011-06-23T09:29:37.191-07:002011-06-23T09:29:37.191-07:00I love, love, love the first four chapters of the ...I love, love, love the first four chapters of the novel. The futuristic quality to the setting really draws me into the story. Your descriptions really give me a visual for each character. This is a very important aspect of a novel for me because it helps to hook my interest. I like that you are discussing a "real" topic and how it can affect our future.Patty D.noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3326273121989470100.post-39510848904993945692011-04-20T19:58:40.261-07:002011-04-20T19:58:40.261-07:00Michah M I am liking this bookit is very interesti...Michah M I am liking this bookit is very interesting and i cant wait to read more. I like how its about the pig.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3326273121989470100.post-58943549856675271222011-03-29T16:18:43.966-07:002011-03-29T16:18:43.966-07:00I have enjoyed reading these two chapters. I am wa...I have enjoyed reading these two chapters. I am waiting to start reading the next chapter, It makes you wonder what really goes through animmals minds. Joshua WebsterJoshua Websternoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3326273121989470100.post-85673476708922668902010-09-16T20:11:36.192-07:002010-09-16T20:11:36.192-07:00I wasn't bored or cunfused at all. I did find ...I wasn't bored or cunfused at all. I did find the talking pig idea to be a little surreal, but I got used to it as I went along. I would love for you to go a little more into detail about the future; I've always been facinated with what other people think the future holds. But as much as you did tell, I wanted to know more. Maybe try going a little further into how people live their lives now.<br /><br />Pietro CartainoPietro Cartainonoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3326273121989470100.post-75655761298808194702010-09-10T22:01:52.053-07:002010-09-10T22:01:52.053-07:00I really only looked this up for the extra credit,...I really only looked this up for the extra credit, but when I started to read it, I really started liking it. Kinda reminds me of 1984 by George Orwell for some strange reason. lol<br /><br />I really liked this; stuff like this has always interested me. I also really liked the way you described the future; we're not too far away from that type of living....<br />That pig should definitely keep his brain; animals have rights just like the rest of us. I also found the way you described the cars to be pretty interesting.<br /><br />I'm going to read the next few chapters; but I don't want to read anymore until the book comes out. Keep me posted; you have one definite buyer. :)<br /><br />My name is Pietro Cartaino, and I am in your SA English IV class this quarter.Pietro Cartainonoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3326273121989470100.post-7918730547406942092010-03-06T11:52:47.882-08:002010-03-06T11:52:47.882-08:00I believe the dialogue in this story shows the bac...I believe the dialogue in this story shows the background of the characters, and gives you more insight to their personalities. Such as Polease being an arrogant young cop who found Frank lesser than simply because of his form. I am ecstatic Frank is trying to fight for his rights despite the odds, and his thoughts keep me interested.<br /><br />Kristen FitzgeraldKristen Fitzgeraldnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3326273121989470100.post-57460992118162617082010-03-02T11:15:59.705-08:002010-03-02T11:15:59.705-08:00Hey, this is carl zamor. I find that the first cha...Hey, this is carl zamor. I find that the first chapter opens up with some comedic references to keep the reader posted and interested and it also makes it easier for them to understand what's happening in the story. Very good work ;)Carl Zamornoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3326273121989470100.post-54655740918916850602010-02-23T06:14:05.389-08:002010-02-23T06:14:05.389-08:00I liked the human animal interaction here. Very fu...I liked the human animal interaction here. Very funny.<br />Also has me wanting to read more. nice job!<br /><br />Kyle GaterllKyle Ghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14600234348774124573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3326273121989470100.post-87687411783633085762010-02-11T13:47:09.376-08:002010-02-11T13:47:09.376-08:00Just read chapter one. I enjoy this, this seems to...Just read chapter one. I enjoy this, this seems to go in my alley. I like how you were pretty creative with making up names because that adds to the element of futuristic. It seems that when you use stuff like lex or so, that is just a futuristic word choice. I will definitely read more of this. Good Job!Kyle Ghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14600234348774124573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3326273121989470100.post-49232321516313772432010-02-07T17:50:43.595-08:002010-02-07T17:50:43.595-08:00I enjoyed the personal relationship established be...I enjoyed the personal relationship established between the characters and the reader; and the dialogue, actions, and thoughts of the characters granted me insight to their personalities. The idea of using pigs as surrogates for organs makes me infer that, in this time, humans have become so egotistic and pious that animals are deemed useless except for personal gain. This ties in with the complete lack of benign intent toward the under-privelaged counterparts of the wealthy. Overall, I believe you did well with establishing the characters, fluidity and relevance in your plot, and also with the cliffhanger at the conclusion of chapter 1; leaving the reader to inquire as to how Polease could help Theocop on his benevolent endeavor.Kristen Fitzgeraldnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3326273121989470100.post-57003100131431847052010-01-31T09:27:09.777-08:002010-01-31T09:27:09.777-08:00I enjoyed the 'futuristic' feel of this ch...I enjoyed the 'futuristic' feel of this chapter.<br /><br />I was a little confused at first because I did not know why anyone would want to do a brain transplant on a pig!<br /><br />I really enjoyed the interesting dialogue between the characters.<br />I can't wait to read more!<br /><br />Cindy Evans<br />ECOT<br />SA English IIIACindy Evansnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3326273121989470100.post-86917191558728356562010-01-28T13:00:59.033-08:002010-01-28T13:00:59.033-08:00Wow! just read chapter 1. really good. Like the fa...Wow! just read chapter 1. really good. Like the fact that the year is 2030. Really good choice of words and the whole thing flowed together nicley. I never found anything i enjoyed reading until now. Great job!Adam Crilownoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3326273121989470100.post-25262677102267084832010-01-22T12:48:22.951-08:002010-01-22T12:48:22.951-08:00I think this is excellent job. It all makes me wan...I think this is excellent job. It all makes me want to keep reading. You had awesome word choice also. All the sentences had a good flow to them. Keep up the work, and ill keep reading! <br /><br />Marissa SlayMarissanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3326273121989470100.post-61027537993966141312010-01-21T11:13:18.874-08:002010-01-21T11:13:18.874-08:00I thought that chapter 2 was very good, I also wil...I thought that chapter 2 was very good, I also will go back and read chapter three for a suspenseful ending on chapter two. It is also different reading the story on the computer than on paper, but all in all a very good story and presented very well. I personally would not change a thing except get it published.Jon Smithnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3326273121989470100.post-77035970568132706102009-12-16T04:10:13.394-08:002009-12-16T04:10:13.394-08:00There was a typo here: “Theocop sighed. He hadn’t ...There was a typo here: “Theocop sighed. He hadn’t pictured himself dressing the animal. “Can you lie down or something?<br />The characters are pretty quirky. I like it.Nick Johnsonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3326273121989470100.post-7015829368839458242009-12-11T02:50:59.833-08:002009-12-11T02:50:59.833-08:00hi, cody armstrong here! you're clever. i enjo...hi, cody armstrong here! you're clever. i enjoy the subtleties of your writing, you don't spell out what's going on ten times then just change ideas; you leave some room for the reader to think for him/herself. everything has a really nice flow and the transition is buttery. i could see why some people though the interview dragged out, but there is good reason for it, if it hadn't been brought up i wouldn't have thought anything of it. excellent writing, i hope you go somewhere with it one day, you totally have the potential! and i enjoyed your short story too:)cody armstrongnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3326273121989470100.post-11342343806620754742009-12-08T18:05:05.638-08:002009-12-08T18:05:05.638-08:00i agree with lacy
your a very good writer
i can t...i agree with lacy <br />your a very good writer<br />i can tell it will turn out well!<br /><br />-audrey pasturaaudreyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15004247213965328214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3326273121989470100.post-47362538331580612342009-11-19T13:46:43.468-08:002009-11-19T13:46:43.468-08:00this was a good chapter. im used to Dean Koontz bo...this was a good chapter. im used to Dean Koontz books but this was a good change. i like the twist on the year 2030 and also apreciated the hidden humor about how the world is going to crap and everyone has to have a special device to breath. its also interesting to hear about "animal rights" and a human brain in an animalnathan cainnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3326273121989470100.post-80906678951473207352009-11-12T18:24:22.524-08:002009-11-12T18:24:22.524-08:00The kid should have police work running through hi...The kid should have police work running through his veins. He’s just young, I hope.” <br /><br />haha that part was funny chapter 3 was pretty good i hope chapter 4 gets better ohh i cant wait :D<br /><br />Tyler Mitchel Harvey<br />id#131072<br />Eng IIITyler Harveyhttp://www.myspace.com/tylertheillestnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3326273121989470100.post-60086666429467130762009-11-11T17:32:58.981-08:002009-11-11T17:32:58.981-08:00I like the book. I feel sorry for Frank. I think y...I like the book. I feel sorry for Frank. I think you did an excellent job with the last two chapters. The readers are getting a good look at how Frank thinks and feels.<br /><br /><br />Nicole JelenNicole Jelennoreply@blogger.com